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Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview

Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview VV67

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you in reference to the hiring ad for waitresses at your restaurant published in the Times Newspaper. My name is Sam, and I would like to apply for the position. I am currently a part time student at New York University. I am studying hotel managment, so working in your restsurant would be an added value for my experience. I only take three classes per semester which are all in the morning, therefore I would be able to work as many nightshifts as needed. I used to help out in my cousin restaurant during the weekend, when I was in high school. Therefore, I am already familiar with the atmosphere. I also have a extremely friendly personality, which comes in handy when dealing with customers. I am available everyday during the afternoon for an interview. I look forward to hearing back from you. Yours faithfully, Sam Smith

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to you in reference to the hiring ad for waitresses at your restaurant published in the Times Newspaper. My name is Sam, and I would like to apply for the position.

I am currently
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part time
 student at New York University. I am studying hotel Possible spelling mistake found.management
managment
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 working in your Possible spelling mistake found.restaurant
restsurant
 would be an This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 value for my experience. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 take three classes per semester which are all in the morning, therefore
 I would be able to work as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
Possible spelling mistake found.nightshirtsnight shifts
nightshifts
 as needed. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
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used
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 out in my cousin restaurant during the weekend, when I was in high school. Therefore
, I am already familiar with the atmosphere. I also
 have Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
extremely
 friendly personality, which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 in handy when dealing with customers.

I am available 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?every day
everyday
 during the afternoon for an interview. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 look forward to hearing back from you.

Yours faithfully
,

Sam Smith