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you want to sell your television. you think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. write a letter to your friend.

you want to sell your television. you think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. write a letter to your friend. 9y9j

Dear UpasanaI am writing this letter with regard to sell my TV. You know that I am moving to new house and I bought all new gadget and in same way I will upgrade my old television with large LED screen. At present the TV set is black in color and it has colored screen. It is working properly and it is well maintained by me. It has some additional functions like you can attach DVD player, speakers and many more. It comes with multiple key remote set. I would like to suggest you that you can take it on 2nd of April. I am selling it at cheap rate and you do not need to hire any van for it as it will fit in your car easily. Please respond at the earliest convenience. Best Wishes, Neha

Dear Possible spelling mistake found.ParanaAsanaParaná
UpasanaI
Did you mean "am I"?am I
am
 writing this letter with regard to sell my TV. You know that I am moving to new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 all new gadget and in same way I will upgrade my This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 television with large LED screen. At present the TV set is A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.black
black in color
 and it has colored screen. It is working properly
 and it is well maintained by me. It has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 additional functions like you can attach DVD player, speakers and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 more. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
It
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 with multiple key remote set. I would like to suggest you that you can take it on 2nd of April. I am selling it at This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :economical
cheap
 rate and you do not need to hire any van for it as it will fit in your car easily
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 respond at the earliest convenience. Best Wishes, Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphNeha.Neha!Neha?Neha:Neha,Neha;
Neha