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you want to sell your television. you think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. write a letter to your friend.

you want to sell your television. you think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. write a letter to your friend. 9y9j
Dear UpasanaI am writing this letter with regard to sell my TV. You know that I am moving to new house and I bought all new gadget and in same way I will upgrade my old television with large LED screen. At present the TV set is black in color and it has colored screen. It is working properly and it is well maintained by me. It has some additional functions like you can attach DVD player, speakers and many more. It comes with multiple key remote set. I would like to suggest you that you can take it on 2nd of April. I am selling it at cheap rate and you do not need to hire any van for it as it will fit in your car easily. Please respond at the earliest convenience. Best Wishes, Neha
Dear
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UpasanaI
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writing this letter with regard to sell my TV. You know that I am moving to new
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house
and I
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bought
all new gadget and in same way I will upgrade my
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old
television with large LED screen. At present the TV set is
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black in color
and it has colored screen. It is working
properly
and it is well maintained by me. It has
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some
additional functions like you can attach DVD player, speakers and
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many
more.
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It
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comes
with multiple key remote set. I would like to suggest you that you can take it on 2nd of April. I am selling it at
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cheap
rate and you do not need to hire any van for it as it will fit in your car
easily
.
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Please
respond at the earliest convenience. Best Wishes,
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Neha

IELTS letter you want to sell your television. you think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. write a letter to your friend.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
137 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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