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Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends They have just sent you some photos of your holiday Write a letter to your friends In your letter thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you did not write earlier ,invite them to come and stay with you

Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends They have just sent you some photos of your holiday Write a letter to your friends In your letter thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you did not write earlier, invite them to come and stay with you ejQA
Dear Sarah I’m writing this to express my gratitude for capturing the beautiful pictures and for enhancing the experience of my maiden overseas holiday at your place. I’d like to thank you for sending the photographs of our last holiday in Maldives as well as for extending your heartiest hospitality to me which was overwhelming. I had really enjoyed the excursion which you have suggested for sighting the numerous sea creatures relevant to my thesis and the unforgettable mouthwatering taste of Maldivian food is inexpressible. However, soon after I resumed my work I had to attend the summit in Singapore because my manager withdrew his registration due to the unforeseen circumstances in his family therefore all my time was invested in data analysis of the endangered species to present in conference on his behalf. Due to this I couldn’t write you earlier which I really regret for. Nevertheless, I’d like to invite you for the birthday party of my husband on Thursday, April 13th which will be organized in The Hilton Dubai and during the weekend you can get opportunity to visit Miracle garden in Dubai, which you were planning for long time. I urge you for this visit and see you soon. Best regards Mohini
Dear Sarah

I’m writing this to express my gratitude for capturing the
beautiful
pictures and for enhancing the experience of my maiden overseas holiday at your place.

I’d like to thank you for sending the photographs of our last holiday
in Maldives
as well
as for extending your heartiest hospitality to me which was overwhelming. I had
really
enjoyed the excursion which you have suggested for sighting the numerous sea creatures relevant to my thesis and the unforgettable mouthwatering taste of Maldivian food is inexpressible.

However
,
soon
after I resumed my work I had to attend the summit in Singapore
because
my manager withdrew his registration due to the unforeseen circumstances in his family
therefore
all my time
was invested
in data analysis of the endangered species to present in conference on his behalf. Due to this I couldn’t write you earlier which I
really
regret for.

Nevertheless
, I’d like to invite you for the birthday party of my husband on
Thursday, April 13th
which will
be organized
in The Hilton Dubai and during the weekend you can
get
opportunity to visit Miracle garden in Dubai, which you were planning for long time.

I urge you for this visit and
see
you
soon
.

Best regards

Mohini
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IELTS letter Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends They have just sent you some photos of your holiday Write a letter to your friends In your letter thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you did not write earlier, invite them to come and stay with you

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205 words
6.0
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