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write a letter to the real estate agent to arrange for ladging for six month period

write a letter to the real estate agent to arrange for ladging for six month period YLPlN

Dear Sir, I am planning to move a new city for next six month for my work assignment. I am writing this a letter for arranging suitable accommodation. I would like to stay near city area because my work place is near by. I preferred a bad room, hall and small kitchen because not daily but some time I like to cook. Also it is have to full furnish because I will not carry any of it with my languages. one more thing I need parking space for car. In addition please check electricity and internet connection due to the fact that I have to do work at home. It should be clean and more beneficial if space is quite. I am moving on next week before I may a visit to place to do confirmation and for basic formalities. This is my contact no. 9033531856 and email id. Pateljignesh191@gmail. com feel free to ask if any details require. I am looking forward to your reply. Your sincerely, Jignesh

Dear Sir,

I am planning to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 a new city for next
 six month for my work assignment. I am writing this a letter for arranging suitable accommodation.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would like to stay near city area This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 my work place is Did you mean "nearby"?nearby
near by
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 preferred a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 room, hall and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 kitchen This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 not daily This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time I like to cook. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
 it is Consider using a past participle here: "had".had
have
 to full furnish This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I will not carry any of it with my languages. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOne
one
 more thing I need parking space for car. In Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?addition,
addition
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 electricity and internet connection due to the fact that I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 do work at home. It should be clean and more beneficial if space is Did you mean "quiet"? 'quiet' means 'silent', 'quite' mean 'very' or 'to a moderate extent'quiet
quite
.

I am moving on next
 week This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 I may a visit to place to do confirmation and for basic formalities. This is my contact no. 9033531856 and email id. Pateljignesh191@gmail. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterCom
com
 feel free to ask if any This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 require.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
sincerely
,

Possible spelling mistake found.BignessDinesh
Jignesh