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Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter • describe the item • explain where and when you left it • say what action you would like the company to take Write at least 150 words.

Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter • describe the item • explain where and when you left it • say what action you would like the company to take lxq3o
Dear sir, I am writing this letter in regarding to inform you that I lost my MacBook Pro which is in silver colour with 15 inch long and 11 inch width. My laptop is an Apple 13. 0 series edition that covered with my address paper on it. Last week, I had been travelled to London by bullet express from central railway station at evening 7: 30pm. It almost took 4 hours for me to approach my destination. During this time I, left my laptop bag in my seat which present in second row of left side of the train besides my seat number carries 45C. However, my work completely depend upon minicomputer where I have to work on my project work presentations. Although, I am entitled to request you to commence an investigate on my issue Moreover, I had observed that there was multiple CCTV cameras were arranged in both train and railway station. I hope it would be helpful for you to track my gadget. I will await your prompt service. Yours faithfully, Uma
Dear sir,

I am writing this letter in
regarding to
inform you that I lost my MacBook Pro which is in silver
colour
with
15 inch
long and
11 inch
width. My laptop is an Apple 13. 0 series edition that covered with my address paper on it.

Last week, I had
been travelled
to London by bullet express from central railway station at evening 7: 30pm. It almost took 4 hours for me to approach my destination. During this time I,
left
my laptop bag in my seat which present in second row of
left
side of the train
besides
my seat number carries 45C.

However
, my work completely depend upon minicomputer where I
have to
work on my project work presentations. Although, I
am entitled
to request you to commence
an investigate
on my issue
Moreover
, I had observed that there was multiple CCTV cameras
were arranged
in both train and railway station. I hope it would be helpful for you to
track
my gadget.

I will await your prompt service.

Yours
faithfully
,

Uma
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter • describe the item • explain where and when you left it • say what action you would like the company to take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
175 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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