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Write a letter to the Principal of the school in the appropriate style using between 120-150 words

Write a letter to the Principal of the school in the appropriate style using between 120-150 words X7WVq
Dear Mr. Principal, I am writing to apply for an English course at your school after seeing your course advertisement on your website, which claims that you provide an English course that suits my needs. If possible, a six-month advanced English course with twenty or thirty hours per week would be excellent. I am 21 years old and have been studying English for 11 years, therefore my proficiency is quite good. However, I am sure I need to improve lots of things. I must admit that I struggle with grammar and writing tasks. Aside from that, I would like to increase my understanding and communication skills by conversing with native speakers. When it comes to language, I am quite studious and interested, and my favorite languages are English and French. Furthermore, I prefer doing different activities every day in order to maximize the experience and knowledge I may get. I just graduated from university on Saturday, so I'll be free from now on. I'd like to get started as soon as possible, and would appreciate a reply at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Duong Luc Han Duong
Dear Mr. Principal,

I am writing to apply for an English
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course
at your school after seeing your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
advertisement on your website, which claims that you provide an English
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
that suits my needs. If possible, a six-month advanced English
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
with twenty or thirty hours per week would be excellent.

I am 21 years
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old
and have been studying English for 11 years,
therefore
my proficiency is quite
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good
.
However
, I am sure I need to
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improve
lots of things. I
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must
admit that I struggle with grammar and writing tasks. Aside from that, I would like to increase my understanding and communication
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skills
by conversing with native speakers.

When it
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comes
to language, I am quite studious and interested, and my favorite languages are English and French.
Furthermore
, I prefer doing
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different
activities every day in order to maximize the experience and knowledge I may
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get
.

I
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just
graduated from university on Saturday,
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so
I'll be free from
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now
on. I'd like to
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get
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started
as
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soon
as possible, and would appreciate a reply at your earliest convenience.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Han
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the Principal of the school in the appropriate style using between 120-150 words

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
186 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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