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Do you think that computers and the Internet have brought more benefits or more problems? Support your opinions with examples. Write about 150 words.

Do you think that computers and the Internet have brought more benefits or more problems? Support your opinions with examples. Write about 150 words. kLQgK
Everything can have both positive and negative sides, but, to become an indispensable need in the recent world, computers and the Internet must be more beneficial than its drawbacks. We still can deny the shortcomings of the Internet. It generated new terminologies in the 20th century: Hackers, cyberbullying and identity thieves. Those terminologies has became the terror and anxiety with many Internet user. But, the Internet itself is not bad, it was devised for supporting purposes, although after its generation, some bad people use it for negative purposes. The internet was first invented in 1969 by the United States to allow computer users to communicate with other users from a far distance. Time flies, computers gradually advance and provide users with many convenient benefits. It starts to become more popular that almost everyone has once at home because of its indispensable benefits. Now, in most of the work, the computers and Internet are required due to its convenience in searching jobs and faster to work with its tools, specially in the pandemic of Covid 19, when we have to work from a far distance. Moreover, the Internet is a perfect place to connect with people. We can share our pictures, comments and chat with different people. There are many hot apps which help us make friends and nowadays, we can even facetime them to have a realistic experience. We can easily read the news on the Internet to catch up with the trends. In the Covid 19 pandemic, the use of the Internet is more necessary than ever. All in all, the Internet was invented for positive purposes, despite the negative problems on the Internet, it is still necessary for us especially in the time of pandemic because its benefits are higher than those drawbacks.
Everything can have both
positive
and
negative
sides,
but
, to become an indispensable need in the recent world, computers and the Internet
must
be more beneficial than its drawbacks. We
still
can deny the shortcomings of the Internet. It generated new terminologies in the 20th century: Hackers, cyberbullying and identity thieves. Those terminologies
has
became
the terror and anxiety with
many
Internet
user
.
But
, the Internet itself is not
bad
, it
was devised
for supporting purposes, although after its generation,
some
bad
people
use
it for
negative
purposes. The internet was
first
invented in 1969 by the United States to
allow
computer
users
to communicate with other
users
from a far distance. Time flies, computers
gradually
advance and provide
users
with
many
convenient benefits. It
starts
to become more popular that almost everyone has once at home
because
of its indispensable benefits.
Now
, in most of the work, the computers and Internet
are required
due to its convenience in searching jobs and faster to work with its tools,
specially
in the pandemic of
Covid 19
, when we
have to
work from a far distance.
Moreover
, the Internet is a perfect place to connect with
people
. We can share our pictures, comments and chat with
different
people
. There are
many
hot apps which
help
us
make
friends and nowadays, we can even
facetime
them to have a realistic experience. We can
easily
read the news on the Internet to catch up with the trends. In the
Covid 19
pandemic, the
use
of the Internet is more necessary than ever. All in all, the Internet
was invented
for
positive
purposes, despite the
negative
problems on the Internet, it is
still
necessary for us
especially
in the time of pandemic
because
its benefits are higher than those drawbacks.
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IELTS letter Do you think that computers and the Internet have brought more benefits or more problems? Support your opinions with examples. Write about 150 words.

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6.0
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