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letter to neighbor about old fence repair

letter to neighbor about old fence repair 5kdBm
Dear Mr. John, I am Madhu your next door neighbor, writing this letter to show a concern regarding your dogs which are quite unfriendly and hostile in nature. To begin with, they are particularly aggressive and bark at the bystanders incessantly. Recently, my children were playing in the backyard, when the dogs tried to intimidate them. Thanks to the fence in between consequently, children were able to get back home safely. In the light of the above incident, it is important to address the poor condition of the fence and desperate need of repair. I would like to propose that a new fence need to be erected as it will act as an effective barrier of protection to everyone including the dogs. Finally, I suggest we split the new fence and associate installation costs. In addition, I recommend we opt for a good quality iron, as it is beneficial for both of us. I understand it may cost more, however, it will pinch less if we share. I hope to hear from you at the earliest. Best regards,
Dear Mr. John,

I am
Madhu
your
next
door neighbor, writing this letter to
show
a concern regarding your dogs which are quite
unfriendly
and hostile in nature.

To
begin
with, they are
particularly
aggressive and bark at the bystanders
incessantly
. Recently, my children were playing in the backyard, when the dogs tried to intimidate them. Thanks to the
fence
in between
consequently
, children were able to
get
back home
safely
.

In the light of the above incident, it is
important
to address the poor condition of the
fence
and desperate need of repair. I would like to propose that a new
fence
need to
be erected
as it will act as an effective barrier of protection to everyone including the dogs.

Finally
, I suggest we split the new
fence
and associate installation costs.
In addition
, I recommend we opt for a
good
quality iron, as it is beneficial for both of us. I understand it may cost more,
however
, it will pinch less if we share.

I hope to hear from you at the earliest.

Best regards,
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IELTS letter letter to neighbor about old fence repair

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
178 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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