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letter to neighbor about old fence repair

letter to neighbor about old fence repair 5kdBm

Dear Mr. John, I am Madhu your next door neighbor, writing this letter to show a concern regarding your dogs which are quite unfriendly and hostile in nature. To begin with, they are particularly aggressive and bark at the bystanders incessantly. Recently, my children were playing in the backyard, when the dogs tried to intimidate them. Thanks to the fence in between consequently, children were able to get back home safely. In the light of the above incident, it is important to address the poor condition of the fence and desperate need of repair. I would like to propose that a new fence need to be erected as it will act as an effective barrier of protection to everyone including the dogs. Finally, I suggest we split the new fence and associate installation costs. In addition, I recommend we opt for a good quality iron, as it is beneficial for both of us. I understand it may cost more, however, it will pinch less if we share. I hope to hear from you at the earliest. Best regards,

Dear Mr. John,

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Madhu
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 door neighbor, writing this letter to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 a concern regarding your dogs which are quite unfriendly
 and hostile in nature.

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begin
 with, they are particularly
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. Recently, my children were playing in the backyard, when the dogs tried to intimidate them. Thanks to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbarwallraildikeroadblockbarbed wire
fence
 in between consequently
, children were able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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.

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important
 to address the poor condition of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbarwallraildikeroadblockbarbed wire
fence
 and desperate need of repair. I would like to propose that a new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbarwallraildikeroadblockbarbed wire
fence
 need to be erected
 as it will act as an effective barrier of protection to everyone including the dogs.

Finally
, I suggest we split the new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbarwallraildikeroadblockbarbed wire
fence
 and associate installation costs. In addition
, I recommend we opt for a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 quality iron, as it is beneficial for both of us. I understand it may cost more, however
, it will pinch less if we share.

I hope to hear from you at the earliest.

Best regards, 