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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter as I came across an advertisement for requirement of governess to take care of a six years old toddler. I found this job pretty interesting as I am actively involved with small kids in my playschool. When I saw your advertisement I found myself to be the most fit candidate as I am currently working as a primary tutor in Mid Day School of Della, Wellington. I am familiar with day care activities of small kids and I believe that I easily gel-up with them. For instance I would love to share my experience with a boy name Richie. He is 4 yrs old boy who comes to our day school and eats his lunch daily from my hands. I am fond of small kids and keenly get along with them. Certainly, I believe that if I get this job then my two problems will sort out. Firstly, as I am doing my studies from Wellington School Of Business I will get an accommodation near by and in addition I would not have to find any part time job for my expenses. It would be great to say that I would be engaged for whole day in my studies and taking care of your son. I am looking forward to your swift reply. Your's faithfully, Mansi Sharma
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter as I came across an advertisement for requirement of governess to take care of a six years
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old
toddler. I found this job pretty interesting as I am
actively
involved with
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small
kids in my playschool.

When I
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saw
your advertisement I found myself to be
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the most fit
candidate as I am
currently
working as a primary tutor in Mid Day School of Della, Wellington. I am familiar with day care activities of
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small
kids and I believe that I
easily
gel-up with them. For
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instance I
would
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love
to share my experience with a boy name Richie. He is 4 yrs
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old
boy who
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comes
to our day school and eats his lunch daily from my hands. I am fond of
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small
kids and
keenly
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get
along with them.

Certainly
, I believe that if I
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get
this job then my two problems will sort out.
Firstly
, as I am doing my studies from Wellington School Of Business I will
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get
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an accommodation
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near by
and
in addition
I would not
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have to
find any
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part time
job for my expenses. It would be great to say that I would
be engaged
for whole day in my studies and taking care of your son.

I am looking forward to your swift reply.

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Your's
faithfully
,
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Mansi
Sharma
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IELTS letter write a letter to the parents and explain why you are suitable for the job?

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
225 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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