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Write a letter to the parents for the post of governess

Write a letter to the parents for the post of governess yx6BE
Dear Sir, I am Manish Kaushik and have seen your advertisement in an Australian magazine regarding governess of your six year aged child. Here I am offering my proposition for the governess of your child. I like the job, I love kids and having professional qualification for governing kinder kids. I am loyal, hardworking and soft-spoken and love orientating with the kids. Thus, feel that I am the most suitable candidature for aforesaid work. I have 10 plus year of proven track record in governing kids. You can run background check on me with my previous employer and the concerned authorities. I love Australia immensely, especially its geographical diversity and adventure activities. I have a keen interest in travelling and adventure and would like to have fun while living in Australia in my spare time. Please consider my proposition for the governess of your child. Thanking you in anticipation!
Dear Sir,

I am
Manish
Kaushik
and have
seen
your advertisement in an Australian magazine regarding governess of your
six year
aged child. Here I am offering my proposition for the governess of your child.

I like the job, I
love
kids
and having professional qualification for governing kinder
kids
. I am loyal, hardworking and soft-spoken and
love
orientating with the
kids
.
Thus
, feel that I am the most suitable candidature for aforesaid work. I have 10 plus year of proven
track
record in governing
kids
. You can run background
check
on me with my previous employer and the concerned authorities.

I
love
Australia
immensely
,
especially
its geographical diversity and adventure activities. I have a keen interest in travelling and adventure and would like to have fun while living in Australia in my spare time.
Please
consider my proposition for the governess of your child.

Thanking you in anticipation!
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the parents for the post of governess

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
149 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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