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Write a letter to the parents for the post of governess

Write a letter to the parents for the post of governess yx6BE

Dear Sir, I am Manish Kaushik and have seen your advertisement in an Australian magazine regarding governess of your six year aged child. Here I am offering my proposition for the governess of your child. I like the job, I love kids and having professional qualification for governing kinder kids. I am loyal, hardworking and soft-spoken and love orientating with the kids. Thus, feel that I am the most suitable candidature for aforesaid work. I have 10 plus year of proven track record in governing kids. You can run background check on me with my previous employer and the concerned authorities. I love Australia immensely, especially its geographical diversity and adventure activities. I have a keen interest in travelling and adventure and would like to have fun while living in Australia in my spare time. Please consider my proposition for the governess of your child. Thanking you in anticipation!

Dear Sir,

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 on me with my previous employer and the concerned authorities.

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love
 Australia immensely
, especially
 its geographical diversity and adventure activities. I have a keen interest in travelling and adventure and would like to have fun while living in Australia in my spare time. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 consider my proposition for the governess of your child.

Thanking you in anticipation! 