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Let's talk about yourself and your dreams

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Hello everyone, You can call me Quang Duc. I am 23 years old. I was born and raised in Dong Anh, Hanoi. Currently, I am a student at Hanoi University of Natural Resources and Environment and my major is land management. I am a generous and easygoing person but when it comes to work, I am a meticulous and perfectionist auntie. I am also an optimist and open-minded person so I have many friends and other social connections My hobbies are listening to music and reading books. And on weekends I usually spend time playing soccer with my friends I'm really happy with my current life! In the future, I will definitely try to improve myself even more, work hard to fulfill my dream of traveling around the world.
Hello everyone, You can call me
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Quang
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. I am 23 years
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was born
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, Hanoi.
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, I am a student at Hanoi University of Natural Resources and Environment and my major is land management.

I am a generous and easygoing person
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when it
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to work, I am a meticulous and perfectionist auntie. I am
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an optimist and open-minded person
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I have
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many
friends and other social connections

My hobbies are listening to music and reading books. And on weekends I
usually
spend time playing soccer with my friends

I'm
really
happy with my
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current
life!

In the future, I will definitely try to
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improve
myself even more, work
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hard
to fulfill my dream of traveling around the world.
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IELTS letter Let's talk about yourself and your dreams

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  American English
3 paragraphs
129 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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