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You need to learn new language. The tutor lives near to you

You need to learn new language. The tutor lives near to you rGrnL

Dear Sir\Madam I am Iroda who lives next to your home. I would be so grateful if you could help to learn Korean. I overheard that you are from Korea. It means I have a chance to learn Korean from a native speaker which is awesome! First and foremost thing is that, I want to be a tutor from Korean language. It could be because in our country most people go to Korea in order to work or study. So that they learn Korean. It means by being tutor I can earn much money to fulfill my needs, but also I can get a goal in my career as well. Secondly, I am inclined to be learn Korean as I do love watching Korean dramas. Inasmuch as I intended to watch my lovely soup operas original version. All in all, learning new language would be very profitable for my self improvement. It will be very nice if you agree for my request. Anyway, thank you in advance spearing me your priceless time. Regards Iroda Isroilova

Dear Sir\Madam

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Regards

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Iroda
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Isroilova