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Your friends recently moved to a new city. You will also be moving to the same city. Write a letter to your friends and include:

Your friends recently moved to a new city. You will also be moving to the same city. Write a letter to your friends and include: bbLqQ

Hi friends, As you all know that I am moving to Toronto soon with the rest of you. The problem now I am facing is where to find a comfortable accommodation. Since I do not have any idea about the location somebody of you can assist me to trace a suitable dwelling for me. Generally, I like to rent out a economical home, however, it is perfect the room with a laundry facility attached, moreover, it will be appreciable if it is in a walkable distance with the university. Additionally, I prefer a place with exponentially restaurants and beaches encompassed. Other than that, any one experienced about how to surf yet, I am ferociously curious to learn that too, hence, some one from you could guide me where I can participate surfing once I reach there. Thank you. Eagerly waiting for to reunite together. Thank you. Sincerely, Beth

Hi friends,

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 you all know that I am moving to Toronto This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 with the rest of you. The problem This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 I am facing is where to find Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "comfortable accommodation".comfortable accommodation
a comfortable accommodation
. Since I do not have any This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 about the location somebody of you can assist me to trace a suitable dwelling for me.

Generally
, I like to rent out Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 economical home, however
, it is perfect the room with a laundry facility attached, moreover
, it will be appreciable if it is in a walkable distance with the university. Additionally
, I prefer a place with exponentially
 restaurants and beaches encompassed.

Other than that, Did you mean "anyone"?anyone
any one
 experienced about how to surf yet
, I am ferociously
 curious to learn that too, hence
, Did you mean "someone"?someone
some one
 from you could guide me where I can participate surfing once I reach there. Thank you. Eagerly
 waiting for to reunite together. Thank you.

Sincerely
, Beth