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Your friends recently moved to a new city. You will also be moving to the same city. Write a letter to your friends and include:

Your friends recently moved to a new city. You will also be moving to the same city. Write a letter to your friends and include: bbLqQ
Hi friends, As you all know that I am moving to Toronto soon with the rest of you. The problem now I am facing is where to find a comfortable accommodation. Since I do not have any idea about the location somebody of you can assist me to trace a suitable dwelling for me. Generally, I like to rent out a economical home, however, it is perfect the room with a laundry facility attached, moreover, it will be appreciable if it is in a walkable distance with the university. Additionally, I prefer a place with exponentially restaurants and beaches encompassed. Other than that, any one experienced about how to surf yet, I am ferociously curious to learn that too, hence, some one from you could guide me where I can participate surfing once I reach there. Thank you. Eagerly waiting for to reunite together. Thank you. Sincerely, Beth
Hi friends,

As
you all know that I am moving to Toronto
soon
with the rest of you. The problem
now
I am facing is where to find
a comfortable accommodation
. Since I do not have any
idea
about the location somebody of you can assist me to trace a suitable dwelling for me.

Generally
, I like to rent out
a
economical home,
however
, it is perfect the room with a laundry facility attached,
moreover
, it will be appreciable if it is in a walkable distance with the university.
Additionally
, I prefer a place with
exponentially
restaurants and beaches encompassed.

Other than that,
any one
experienced about how to surf
yet
, I am
ferociously
curious to learn that too,
hence
,
some one
from you could guide me where I can participate surfing once I reach there. Thank you.
Eagerly
waiting for to reunite together. Thank you.

Sincerely
, Beth
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IELTS letter Your friends recently moved to a new city. You will also be moving to the same city. Write a letter to your friends and include:

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  American English
5 paragraphs
147 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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