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Write a letter to the owner of a restaurant. give the reason for the party and details of when you would like to go to the restaurant describe what food the group will require say how many people will attend and ask how much it will cost

Write a letter to the owner of a restaurant. give the reason for the party and details of when you would like to go to the restaurant describe what food the group will require say how many people will attend and ask how much it will cost ArLa1
Dear Sir, I am Ms Trupti Pendse working for a company named ‘Nirmal Lifestyle’ as a senior Finance executive. We wish to arrange a small party for our employees on occasion of achievement by our employees in terms of specific project. We wish to book dinner a party for total 50 people. This party is to be arranged for celebrating victory of our employees, it’s a token of appreciation for their excellent performance in the specific project. Please consider the following details for the party. The guests will check-in the restaurant by around 7pm. Please make starters available around 7. 15 pm followed by cocktails and drinks. Thereafter, the dinner to be served around 8-8. 30 PM. The guests would like to have Paneer starters and would like to be arranged a buffet for dinner with various veggies, salads, Chinese noodles etc The total rough cost estimated is about Rs 4000. Kindly confirm the total cost considering the above details. We will wait for your revert and confirmation. Thanking You, Yours sincerely, Trupti Pendse
Dear Sir,

I am Ms
Trupti
Pendse
working for a
company
named ‘
Nirmal
Lifestyle’ as a senior Finance executive. We wish to arrange a
small
party
for our employees on occasion of achievement by our employees in terms of specific project.

We wish to book dinner a
party
for total 50
people
. This
party
is to
be arranged
for celebrating victory of our employees, it’s a token of appreciation for their excellent performance in the specific project.
Please
consider the following
details
for the
party
. The guests will
check
-in the restaurant by around 7pm.
Please
make
starters available around 7. 15 pm followed by cocktails and drinks. Thereafter, the dinner to
be served
around 8-8. 30 PM. The guests would like to have
Paneer
starters and would like to
be arranged
a buffet for dinner with various veggies, salads, Chinese noodles etc

The total rough cost estimated is about Rs 4000. Kindly confirm the total cost considering the above
details
.

We will wait for your revert and confirmation.

Thanking You,

Yours
sincerely
,

Trupti
Pendse
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the owner of a restaurant. give the reason for the party and details of when you would like to go to the restaurant describe what food the group will require say how many people will attend and ask how much it will cost

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  American English
7 paragraphs
173 words
5.5
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