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write a letter to the organizer of the summer camp.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for the position of sports coach for children and young people in your summer camp, which was advertised on the internet. I have included my resume for your consideration. Firstly, I graduated from the University of Physical Culture and Sports of Uzbekistan. I am currently employed by a fitness club as a consultant trainer, however, I also want to work with children. Naturally, I like children, and I would be happy to contribute to the health of the children. Then, I am patient, friendly and believe in my skill to instruct participants of summer camp to a healthy lifestyle. In addition, I am good at organizing sports tournaments, and I think competitions develop the fighting instinct in a person. I enclose my CV and I would be glad to attend an interview at any time convenient to you. Yours faithfully, Akbar Avazov
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to apply for the position of sports coach for children and young
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
in your summer camp, which
was advertised
on the internet. I have included my resume for your consideration.

Firstly
, I graduated from the University of Physical Culture and Sports of Uzbekistan. I am
currently
employed by a fitness club as a consultant trainer,
however
, I
also
want to work with children.
Naturally
, I like children, and I would be happy to contribute to the health of the children.

Then, I am patient, friendly and believe in my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
to instruct participants of summer camp to a healthy lifestyle.
In addition
, I am
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
at organizing sports tournaments, and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
competitions develop the fighting instinct in a person.

I enclose my CV and I would be glad to attend an interview at any time convenient to you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Akbar
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Avazov
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IELTS letter write a letter to the organizer of the summer camp.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
150 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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