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Letter to home owner for rent increment

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Dear Mr. Smith, We moved in your apartment just 3 months ago and your recent rent increase is very surprising to me. We decided to move into this apartment as the rent we agreed upon was affordable. I know your home is well maintained and is situated at a prime location. But I also would like to inform you that I enquired neighbors about how much they are paying monthly, it is not as high as what you have asked us to pay. So I feel the rent increment is unreasonable. My wife has lost her job due to a pandemic, since then I am the sole earner in my family. So it will take time for us to settle down with all the finance situation. If you decide to keep the same rent as before I will readily sign the lease for one year. We have been timely paying the rent every month and I am confident that there must be no complaint against us by the neighbors. I would like you to consider all these factors and rethink your decision. If you are firm on rent the increment then I don't have any option but to vacate. Yours Sincerely, David Doe

Dear Mr. Smith,

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just
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very
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move
 into this apartment as the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtariffrentalpaymentlease
rent
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agreed
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But
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enquired
 neighbors about how much they are paying monthly, it is not as high as what you have asked us to pay. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I feel the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtariffrentalpaymentlease
rent
 increment is unreasonable.

My wife has lost her job due to a pandemic, since then I am the sole earner in my family. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 it will take time for us to settle down with all the finance situation. If you decide to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 the same You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtariffrentalpaymentlease
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before
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sign
 the lease for one year. We have been timely paying the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtariffrentalpaymentlease
rent
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month and
 I am confident that there This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 be no complaint against us by the neighbors. I would like you to consider all these factors and rethink your decision.

If you are firm on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtariffrentalpaymentlease
rent
 the increment then I don't have any option This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 to vacate.

Yours Sincerely
,

David Doe