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Letter to home owner for rent increment

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Dear Mr. Smith, We moved in your apartment just 3 months ago and your recent rent increase is very surprising to me. We decided to move into this apartment as the rent we agreed upon was affordable. I know your home is well maintained and is situated at a prime location. But I also would like to inform you that I enquired neighbors about how much they are paying monthly, it is not as high as what you have asked us to pay. So I feel the rent increment is unreasonable. My wife has lost her job due to a pandemic, since then I am the sole earner in my family. So it will take time for us to settle down with all the finance situation. If you decide to keep the same rent as before I will readily sign the lease for one year. We have been timely paying the rent every month and I am confident that there must be no complaint against us by the neighbors. I would like you to consider all these factors and rethink your decision. If you are firm on rent the increment then I don't have any option but to vacate. Yours Sincerely, David Doe
Dear Mr. Smith,

We
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moved
in your apartment
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just
3 months ago and your recent
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rent
increase is
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very
surprising to me. We decided to
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move
into this apartment as the
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rent
we
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agreed
upon was affordable.

I know your home is well maintained and
is situated
at a prime location.
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But
I
also
would like to inform you that I
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enquired
neighbors about how much they are paying monthly, it is not as high as what you have asked us to pay.
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So
I feel the
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rent
increment is unreasonable.

My wife has lost her job due to a pandemic, since then I am the sole earner in my family.
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So
it will take time for us to settle down with all the finance situation. If you decide to
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keep
the same
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rent
as
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before
I will
readily
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sign
the lease for one year. We have been timely paying the
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rent
every
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month and
I am confident that there
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must
be no complaint against us by the neighbors. I would like you to consider all these factors and rethink your decision.

If you are firm on
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rent
the increment then I don't have any option
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but
to vacate.

Yours
Sincerely
,

David Doe
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IELTS letter Letter to home owner for rent increment

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
202 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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