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Complaint letter about credit card statement

Complaint letter about credit card statement VExeO
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Leanne Rimes, and I am writing this letter with respect to my credit card statement which I received from your bank yesterday. In the statement, a number of expensive purchases are included during the 31-day period it covers; purchases I am absolutely certain that I did not make. To support this claim, I have included in this letter copies of receipts of all the items I purchased as well as details of my monthly financial obligations in the last month for your careful and detailed perusal. For example, it is unlikely that I would purchase a 1, 000 golden bracelet when I have the mortgage on my house pending, and two children in college. Once you have gone through them, you will discover that my credit card statement is in gross error, and needs to be rectified. I would appreciate it if the bank can reverse the charges as soon as possible. Thank you in advance. Sincerely Leanne Rimes
Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Leanne Rimes, and I am writing this letter with respect to my credit card statement which I received from your bank yesterday.

In the statement, a number of expensive
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchases
are included
during the 31-day period it covers;
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchases
I am
absolutely
certain that I did not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
.

To support this claim, I have included in this letter copies of receipts of all the items I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
as well
as
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
of my monthly financial obligations in the last month for your careful and detailed perusal.
For example
, it is unlikely that I would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
a 1, 000 golden
Possible agreement error. The noun 'bracelet' seems to be countable, so consider using: "bracelets".
bracelet
when I have the mortgage on my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
pending, and two children in college.

Once you have gone through them, you will discover that my credit card statement is in gross error, and needs to
be rectified
.

I would appreciate it if the bank can reverse the charges as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible.

Thank you in advance.

Sincerely


Leanne Rimes
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IELTS letter Complaint letter about credit card statement

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
165 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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