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write a letter to the newspaper editor to publish information about the club

write a letter to the newspaper editor to publish information about the club kqBO

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to print my advertisement in your newspaper so more people can know about my start up and can join interested person This club is specifically for sports activities. Any age group person can join this club. We are providing lots of thing related to sports like knowledge related to sports or particular game. Also, we arrange talk relevant specific subject by experts. End of session provide some time for discussion thus you can ask and clear tour mind with related topic. In more we arrange tournament, one day match in this you can express your abilities as well knowledge. we are also provide good plate for your better all over development. We will arrange our first meeting at our club location. Therefore, you can see our facilities and amenities. It is on 1sth June, Sunday at 7p. m. Be present at sharp so we can utilize our quality time as well solve your doubts. Yours Faithfully, Jignesh

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to print my advertisement in your newspaper This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 can know about my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 up and can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 interested person

This club is specifically
 for sports activities. Any age group person can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 this club. We are providing Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: "lots of things".lots of things
lots of thing
 related to sports like knowledge related to sports or particular game. Also
, we arrange talk relevant specific subject by experts. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
End
 of session provide This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time for discussion thus
 you can ask and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 tour mind with related topic. In more we arrange tournament, one day match in this you can express your abilities as well
 knowledge. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWe
we
 are also
Consider using a past participle here: "provided".provided
provide
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 plate for your better all over development.

We will arrange our first
 meeting at our club location. Therefore
, you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 our facilities and amenities. It is on 1sth June, Sunday at 7p. m. Be present at sharp This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 we can utilize our quality time as well
 solve your doubts.

Yours Faithfully
,

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Jignesh