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Applying for the summer intern of Communication Department of a company

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Dear Sir/Madam, With the reference to your summer intern recruitment, I would like to submit my application for this position. I am studying International Economics at Foreign trade University and have already finished Marketing and Designing Course of Yale University. In addition, I also have MOS certificate of Microsoft that mean I am good at official techniques such as Exccel or Powerpoint. Beside, I am working in Communication club and worked as a telesales for a workshop company for almost 2 years so that I will run in this role better and more quickly. Morever, I am a positive person and enjoy communicating as well as working as a part of team. Therefore, i believe my skills and eperience are in line with the requirements for the job position. I look forward to hearing from you soon, Best regards, TAN Ngoc Tran Anh
Dear Sir/Madam,

With the reference to your summer intern recruitment, I would like to submit my application for this position.

I am studying International Economics at Foreign trade University and have already finished Marketing and Designing Course of Yale University.
In addition
, I
also
have MOS certificate of Microsoft that mean I am
good
at official techniques such as
Exccel
or
Powerpoint
. Beside, I am working in Communication club and worked as
a telesales
for a workshop
company
for almost 2 years
so
that I will run in this role better and more
quickly
.
Morever
, I am a
positive
person and enjoy communicating
as well
as working as a part of team.
Therefore
,
i
believe my
skills
and
eperience
are in line with the requirements for the job position.

I look forward to hearing from you
soon
,

Best regards,

TAN

Ngoc
Tran
Anh
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IELTS letter Applying for the summer intern of Communication Department of a company

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  American English
6 paragraphs
142 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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