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Write a letter to the manager of a hotel where you stayed and left two important things.

Write a letter to the manager of a hotel where you stayed and left two important things. Y1gr
Dear Mr. smithI am writing this letter to request you to check my things, which I accidentally left room in 203. My name is Komalpreet kaur. I was stayed in your hotel room no 203 from 21 January to 28 January. When I reached at my home when I noticed that I had lost my Guess Watch and Gold ring. could you please your housekeeping department and if see my things is there. These things are very important for me because they gave from my mother so I loves a lot my mother. My watch color is golden and ring also golden color. I remembered, put these things in a basket. I would appreciate if you will contact as soon as possible. I am sending address also if you will get my things, Please send me on my address. My address is 12- 28 lakefront road, Dartmouth, NS, B2Y3C3. I would be very thankful to you. Hoping to hear from you soon regarding this matter. Your Sincerely, Komalpreet Kaur
Dear Mr.
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writing this letter to request you to
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check
my things, which I
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left
room in 203. My name is
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Komalpreet
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kaur
. I
was stayed
in your hotel room no 203 from 21 January to 28 January. When I reached at my home when I noticed that I had lost my Guess
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Watch
and Gold ring.
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could
you
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please
your housekeeping department and if
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see
my things is there. These things are
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very
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important
for me
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because
they gave from my mother
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I
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loves
a lot my mother. My
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watch
color is golden and ring
also
golden color. I remembered, put these things in a basket. I would appreciate if you will contact as
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soon
as possible.
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I
am sending address
also
if you will
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get
my things,
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Please
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me on my address. My address is
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12- 28
lakefront road, Dartmouth, NS, B2Y3C3. I would be
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very
thankful to you. Hoping to hear from you
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soon
regarding this matter.
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Your
Sincerely
,
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Komalpreet
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Kaur

IELTS letter Write a letter to the manager of a hotel where you stayed and left two important things.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
168 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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