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Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobs describe your new job tell him/her your other news

Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobs describe your new job tell him/her your other news 9baj

Dear Peter, How are you? I hope you’ve been well. Sorry for having been out of touch for a short while. There have been some changes in my life and I wanted to let you know the latest from my side. The big news is that I have finally changed my job. Do you remember when you were here on holiday, and I always talked about how I hated my boring bank job? Well, it was clear I needed a change. So, finally, I took a part-time advertising course and trained to be a creative designer. Now I’m working full-time in an agency. Each day, I look forward to going to work. My clients come from all over the world and I love working with them. Aside from that, I also moved to a new apartment near the building where I work. It’s small, but downtown, so I am right in the heart of the city, instead of way out in the suburbs. Suddenly, there are so many fun things to do, in the evenings too. I am a much happier person today because of these recent changes. So, how about you? I hope you’ll have a chance to visit Australia again soon. In the meantime, please write and let me know what’s new with you. Warm wishes Kim

Dear Peter,

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let
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Warm wishes

Kim