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You have seen an advertisement in the local newspaper for swimming lessons at your community sports centre. You want to find out more about these lessons. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In the letter describe how well you can swim at the moment explain why you want to learn to swim better enquire about the time and cost of the swimming lessons

You have seen an advertisement in the local newspaper for swimming lessons at your community sports centre. You want to find out more about these lessons. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In the letter describe how well you can swim at the moment explain why you want to learn to swim better enquire about the time and cost of the swimming lessons 7MPA

Dear Sir, My name is Johnny, and I am a life time member of your esteemed 'Fitness and Sports Centre'. I am writing to inquire about the whereabouts of the new swimming classes, which I came to know through an advertisement in the Wednesday 'City Times' newspaper. Presently, I am a novice to swimming. Therefore, I would like to learn this skill as a beginner. Since my childhood, I wanted to be a pro swimmer. However, I became unable to fulfill my desire because of oher personal responsibilities. While going through the advertisement I felt this is the perfect time that I would accomplish my dream via your centre. Additionally, I request you to apprise me of the schedule and cost structure of learning this life saving skill. You can email me at johnny167@gmail. com. Alternatively, I am also available on 09415326892. Thanking you for consideration. Yours faithfully, Johnny.

Dear Sir,

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life time
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Centre
'. I am writing to inquire about the whereabouts of the new swimming classes, which I came to know through an advertisement in the Wednesday 'City Times' newspaper.

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, I am a novice to swimming. Therefore
, I would like to learn this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
 as a beginner. Since my childhood, I wanted to be a pro swimmer. However
, I became unable to fulfill my desire This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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 personal responsibilities. “While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
 going through the advertisement I felt this is the perfect time that I would accomplish my dream via your Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
.

Additionally
, I request you to apprise me of the schedule and cost structure of learning this life saving This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
. You can email me at johnny167@gmail. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterCom
com
. Alternatively
, I am also
 available on 09415326892.

Thanking you for consideration.

Yours faithfully
, Johnny. 