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your company introduced a work uniform that you are mostly happy with, except for on thing. write a letter to your manfer and include the following

your company introduced a work uniform that you are mostly happy with, except for on thing. write a letter to your manfer and include the following EBLD

Dear Laurel CollinsI am writing this letter to inform you that all workers are very happy about new uniform. I am also happy because it is very beautiful color and unique in all nursing homes. i like Pink trouser and white shortsI would be grateful if you would change pants instead of shorts because everyone is not comfortable in shorts so that's why I am writing this letter behalf of everybody. I want to suggest one more thing you should put all days to wear a uniform Please respond at the earliest convenience. Your Sincerely, Komalpreet Kaur

Dear Laurel Possible spelling mistake found.CollinsCollins I
CollinsI
Did you mean "am I"?am I
am
 writing this letter to inform you that all workers are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 happy about new uniform. I am also
 happy This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 color and unique in all nursing homes. Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 like Pink trouser and white Possible spelling mistake found.shortsshorts I
shortsI
 would be grateful if you would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 pants instead
 of shorts This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 everyone is not comfortable in shorts This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that's why I am writing this letter behalf of everybody. I want to suggest one more thing you should put all days to wear a uniform This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 respond at the earliest convenience. Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
Sincerely
, Possible spelling mistake found.
Komalpreet
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphKaur.Kaur!Kaur?Kaur:Kaur,Kaur;
Kaur