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ou work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter,describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work say what you want the shop or company to do

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Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to seek your assistance to alleviate the issue I encountered while working at home. The laptop provided by the company for official purpose has been breakdown due to excessive utilization during this pandemic. The charger has choked and some keys from the keyboard are not operational. The bosses provided me an additional responsibility of accomplishing the tasks. On the contrary, due to this problem, I am unable to fulfill my professional obligations and tasks allocated by the seniors. Moreover, the online meeting has been scheduled next week, where I have to deliver the presentation and I do not have any source for preparation. The laptop is in warranty and I have already informed the IT department to mitigate the issue as soon as possible. Kindly, send one personnel to my residence from the technical team with proper equipment otherwise, provide the substitute until the laptop gets fixed by concerned authorities. Thank you

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to seek your assistance to alleviate the issue I encountered while working at home. The laptop provided by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 for official purpose has been breakdown due to excessive utilization during this pandemic. The charger has choked and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 keys from the keyboard are not operational.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 bosses provided me an additional responsibility of accomplishing the tasks. On the contrary
, due to this problem, I am unable to fulfill my professional obligations and tasks allocated by the seniors. Moreover
, the online meeting has been scheduled
next
 week, where I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 deliver the presentation and I do not have any source for preparation.

The laptop is in warranty and I have already informed the IT department to mitigate the issue as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible. Kindly, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 one personnel to my residence from the technical team with proper equipment otherwise
, provide the substitute until the laptop This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectified
fixed
 by concerned authorities.

Thank you

IELTS letter ou work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter, describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work say what you want the shop or company to do

Letter

American English

5 paragraphs

158 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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