You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. v.3

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to report to you about the last month an article in your International travel magazine, written by Ahmed Mustafa. The name of it was "The history of Sohar" page 15. The information that has recorded in the story incorrect as I am a concert about. I am born and resited in Sohar and I have my degree in Education of History and I had a couple of studies about Sohar. And I am working in the USA as a history teacher to teach about Oman. The article was mixing about Sohar and Muscat. However, Ahmed has written about the old mountain and he has said it call Shamq but Shamaq is the name of the mountain in Muscat. Thusfore, people out here were asking me about this information and how the editor has agreed to establish this story without checking the quality of the data. In light of the fact that people getting the wrong picture of this International magazine and that will effect the advertisement and the will affect the readers and the magazine audiences. I wish you can make essential checking before you establish your magazine. Thank you, Yours faithfully, Sawsan