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One of your pen friends wants to visit your country. You have never seen him/her, and you will be late at the airport. Write a letter to him/her to inform. In your letter, • explain why you will be late • suggest him a place to wait for you • say how he/she can recognise you

One of your pen friends wants to visit your country. You have never seen him/her, and you will be late at the airport. Write a letter to him/her to inform. In your letter, • explain why you will be late • suggest him a place to wait for you • say how he/she can recognise you Bb0a
Dear Riya, I hope you are doing great. I am glad that you are coming to my country this weekend. I am looking forward to meet you. However, I am writting this letter to inform you that due to some unexpected office work, I will be coming bit late. Actually yesterday night, I got call from my manager and I have some urgent meeting scheduled on your arrival day. I tried to avoid it but as I am primary member of team I have to be present there. You have to wait for me for an hour only. I will be coming as early as possible. I would suggest till that time you may take your baggage and either have some coffee or snacks. There is great bookshop at the airport so you can spend some time there as well. I will be wearing black trouser and white shirt. To make things easier I will be holding one white board with your name and will wait outside Terminal 4. In advance, I am apologising for the inconvinience. Hope to see you soon. Yours lovingly, Pankti
Dear
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Riya
,

I hope you are doing great. I am glad that you are coming to my country this weekend.
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I
am looking forward to
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meet
you.
However
, I am
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writting
this letter to inform you that due to
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some
unexpected office work, I will be coming
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bit
late.

Actually
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yesterday night
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
call from my manager and I have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
urgent meeting scheduled on your arrival day. I tried to avoid it
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
as I
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am primary
member of team I
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have to
be present there. You
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have to
wait for me for an hour
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
. I will be coming as early as possible. I would suggest till that time you may take your baggage and either have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
coffee or snacks. There is great bookshop at the airport
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
you can spend
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
time there
as well
.

I will be wearing black trouser and white shirt. To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
things easier I will be holding one white board with your name and will wait outside Terminal 4.

In advance, I am
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apologising
for the
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inconvinience
.

Hope to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
lovingly
,

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Pankti

IELTS letter One of your pen friends wants to visit your country. You have never seen him/her, and you will be late at the airport. Write a letter to him/her to inform. In your letter, • explain why you will be late • suggest him a place to wait for you • say how he/she can recognise you

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  American English
8 paragraphs
184 words
5.0
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