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Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.

Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter. 77mk
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a loyal customer of your branch for last twenty-years. I am writing this letter to appraise you about my dissatisfaction for the inefficient services provided by your branch. Let me explain to you the situation in detail. Last week, I came to your branch and submitted an application for the issuance of cheque book. I was informed by the representative that the cheque book will be delivered to my registered address in three working days. I waited for seven-eight days but still no cheque book was delivered to my house. Please provide me the time-line by which I can expect the delivery of cheque book at my home address. As I have to make an urgent payment, I need a cheque book by tomorrow. In case the said payment is not made, I will be incurring huge financial loss. In case, it is not possible, please facilitate the service of wire-transfer of funds without any charge as the mistake is on the part of the bank. I will look forward to hearing from you at the earliest. Yours faithfully, Moeez Sabuwala.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a loyal customer of your branch for last twenty-years. I am writing this letter to appraise you about my dissatisfaction for the inefficient services provided by your branch.

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Let
me
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explain
to you the situation in detail. Last week, I came to your branch and submitted an application for the issuance of
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cheque
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
. I
was informed
by the representative that the
Possible spelling mistake. 'cheque' is British English.
cheque
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
will
be delivered
to my registered address in three working days. I waited for seven-eight days
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but
still
no
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cheque
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
was delivered
to my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
provide me the time-line by which I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expect
the delivery of
Possible spelling mistake. 'cheque' is British English.
cheque
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
at my home address. As I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
an urgent payment, I need a
Possible spelling mistake. 'cheque' is British English.
cheque
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
by tomorrow. In case the said payment is not made, I will be incurring huge financial loss.

In case, it is not possible,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
facilitate the service of wire-transfer of funds without any charge as the mistake is on the part of the bank.

I will look forward to hearing from you at the earliest.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Moeez
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Sabuwala
.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
187 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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