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Write a letter to the manager .give details of the course.say how the course would be useful.

Write a letter to the manager. give details of the course. say how the course would be useful. JLXN0

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to the manager of online training course. This course recently opened to help which has problem with English language. Members of this group consists of only learner english, who wants to prepare for the level examination pre IELTS. The course trainers are very experienced and they have level certificates. I am presently working as an english teacher in the kindergarten. In my view, I need participate to this cours of your company. I am sure I would be improve my english language and increase knowledge for my level testing. Your company could help me improving my poor vocabulary and paraphrases. I had been problem with listening and writing skills but now I can write some informal and formal types of letters. In addition this, course trainers have been teaching us with modern qualifications and every lessons are useful. I am grateful for your company for their help to us. In my opinion, every members of this course achieve high levels in the future. I wish them good luck. Your faithfullyJohn

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 informal and formal types of letters. In Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?addition,
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members
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 achieve high You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheight
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good
 luck. Your Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphfaithfullyJohn.faithfullyJohn!faithfullyJohn?faithfullyJohn:faithfullyJohn,faithfullyJohn;
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