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here is the part of an email you have received from sam, an English- speaking friend. though my sister's quite a bit younger than me, we are good friends most of the time. So teel me about a relative of yours who you see a lot and why you enjoy being with him or her. hope to hear from you soon.

here is the part of an email you have received from sam, an English- speaking friend. though my sister's quite a bit younger than me, we are good friends most of the time. So teel me about a relative of yours who you see a lot and why you enjoy being with him or her. hope to hear from you soon. wad3n

Dear Sam, I am glad to hear that you also have such a relationship with your sister. I am writing this letter so as to tell you about my brother who is younger than me about 2 years. I have a younger brother and my sister's much younger so we do not often do the same things. however, I have a cousin brother who is the son of my uncle. He does not live far from my house due to I could tell him to go out easily. Although we are different gender, we have the same hobbies namely playing guitar, reading books, and traveling. I often teach him about Maths problems because I am quite good at maths and he teaches me how to play guitar without seeing guidelines on the Internet. At the weekend, my family and he go to picnic together. furthermore, he always helps me when I am in need. In conclusion, he is such a friendly person that I enjoy being with him. I hope that you could tell me more about your sister later. Best wish, Gigi.

Dear Sam, I am glad to hear that you also
 have such a relationship with your sister. I am writing this letter 'So as to' expresses purpose and is used in formal texts. Consider using "to"to
so as to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you about my brother who is younger than me about 2 years. I have a younger brother and my sister's much younger This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 we do not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 do the same things. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterHowever
however
, I have a cousin brother who is the son of my uncle. He does not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 far from my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 due to I could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 him to go out easily
. Although we are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 gender, we have the same hobbies namely
 playing guitar, reading books, and traveling. I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 teach him about Possible spelling mistake. 'Maths' is British English.Math
Maths
 problems This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I am quite This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 at Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).maths, and
maths and
 he teaches me how to play guitar without seeing guidelines on the Internet. At the weekend, my Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).family, and
family and
 he The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "goes", "went".goeswent
go
 to picnic together. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFurthermore
furthermore
, he always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 me when I am in need. In conclusion
, he is such a friendly person that I enjoy being with him. I hope that you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 me more about your sister later. A determiner is probably missing here: "the Best".The Best
Best
 wish, Gigi. 