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here is the part of an email you have received from sam, an English- speaking friend. though my sister's quite a bit younger than me, we are good friends most of the time. So teel me about a relative of yours who you see a lot and why you enjoy being with him or her. hope to hear from you soon.

here is the part of an email you have received from sam, an English- speaking friend. though my sister's quite a bit younger than me, we are good friends most of the time. So teel me about a relative of yours who you see a lot and why you enjoy being with him or her. hope to hear from you soon. wad3n
Dear Sam, I am glad to hear that you also have such a relationship with your sister. I am writing this letter so as to tell you about my brother who is younger than me about 2 years. I have a younger brother and my sister's much younger so we do not often do the same things. however, I have a cousin brother who is the son of my uncle. He does not live far from my house due to I could tell him to go out easily. Although we are different gender, we have the same hobbies namely playing guitar, reading books, and traveling. I often teach him about Maths problems because I am quite good at maths and he teaches me how to play guitar without seeing guidelines on the Internet. At the weekend, my family and he go to picnic together. furthermore, he always helps me when I am in need. In conclusion, he is such a friendly person that I enjoy being with him. I hope that you could tell me more about your sister later. Best wish, Gigi.
Dear Sam, I am glad to hear that you
also
have such a relationship with your sister. I am writing this letter
so as to
tell
you about my brother who is younger than me about 2 years. I have a younger brother and my sister's much younger
so
we do not
often
do the same things.
however
, I have a cousin brother who is the son of my uncle. He does not
live
far from my
house
due to I could
tell
him to go out
easily
. Although we are
different
gender, we have the same hobbies
namely
playing guitar, reading books, and traveling. I
often
teach him about
Maths
problems
because
I am quite
good
at
maths and
he teaches me how to play guitar without seeing guidelines on the Internet. At the weekend, my
family and
he
go
to picnic together.
furthermore
, he always
helps
me when I am in need.
In conclusion
, he is such a friendly person that I enjoy being with him. I hope that you could
tell
me more about your sister later.
Best
wish, Gigi.
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IELTS letter here is the part of an email you have received from sam, an English- speaking friend. though my sister's quite a bit younger than me, we are good friends most of the time. So teel me about a relative of yours who you see a lot and why you enjoy being with him or her. hope to hear from you soon.

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