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You recently bought a vacuum cleaner. It went wrong almost immediately. Write a letter of complaint

You recently bought a vacuum cleaner. It went wrong almost immediately. Write a letter of complaint wOrPr
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in the hope of that you can help me with a problem regarding the vacuum cleaner that I recently bought from your shop at Bahar Street in Uchkuprik. After only two days, it started to go wrong. On the third of October, I visited your local supermarket to purchase a new vacuum cleaner. Looking around the stalls, I chose one that produced by Samsung and I asked a shop - assistant about it. After getting all information, I decided to buy it. Unfortunately, only two days later at home while I was using the vacuum cleaner, it sounded any strange voice. Immediately, I switched off the machine and I checked the plug connection however, it had no problem with the link of electrocity. In addition, after utilizing the engine of the product got very hot. Therefore, I could not use it sufficiently. To be honest, I am dissappointed with my purchase and this is not what I expected. I would like you to replace the vacuum cleaner with a well-functioning one that the same type. Otherwise, I will be forced to report this to the Customer Service Association responsible for this problem. I look forward to receiving a reply. Yours faithfully, Malohat Kodirova
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in the hope of that you can
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help
me with a problem regarding the
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vacuum
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cleaner
that I recently
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bought
from your shop at
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Bahar
Street in
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Uchkuprik
. After
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only
two days, it
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started
to go
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wrong
. On the third of October, I visited your local supermarket to
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purchase
a new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vacuum
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cleaner
. Looking around the stalls, I chose one that produced by Samsung and I asked a shop
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-
assistant about it. After getting all information, I decided to
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buy
it. Unfortunately,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
two days later at home while I was using the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vacuum
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cleaner
, it sounded any strange voice. Immediately, I switched off the machine and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
checked
the plug connection
however
, it had no problem with the link of
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electrocity
.
In addition
, after utilizing the engine of the product
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got
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very
hot.
Therefore
, I could not
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use
it
sufficiently
. To be honest, I am
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dissappointed
with my
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purchase
and this is not what I
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expected
. I would like you to replace the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vacuum
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cleaner
with a well-functioning one that the same type.
Otherwise
, I will
be forced
to report this to the Customer Service Association responsible for this problem. I look forward to receiving a reply. Yours
faithfully
,
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Malohat
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Kodirova
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IELTS letter You recently bought a vacuum cleaner. It went wrong almost immediately. Write a letter of complaint

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
209 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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