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Your friend recently came to your birthday party and bought you an expensive present

Your friend recently came to your birthday party and bought you an expensive present 1AO5N

Dear Mildred, How are you, your parents and siblings? hope you all are doing good? I am writing to express my gratitude for the expensive washing machine you bought for me on my birthday as a gift. I really needed it and it came at the right time. Firstly, I am truly grateful for the machine because. and you really made my day a happy one that I will never forget. I really needed it and it came at the right time. I really appreciate. Secondly, the washing machine washes my clothes in bulk, dries them and saves my time compared to when I was using my hands to wash. Thus, the make of the machine is Scanfrost and it is 13 metres wide and I love it. Lastly, I would like us to meet at Lakeside Hotel by 3: 00PM so that we could spend time, drink together and watch movies at the cinema section. Thanks in anticipation. I look forward to seeing you. Best regards, Slides

Dear Mildred,

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hope
 you all are doing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
? I am writing to express my gratitude for the expensive washing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusautomobiletoolapplianceinstrument
machine
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bought
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really
 needed it and it came at the right time.

Firstly
, I am truly
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because
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and
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really
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really
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Secondly
, the washing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusautomobiletoolapplianceinstrument
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 washes my clothes in bulk, dries them and saves my time compared to when I was using my hands to wash. Thus
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusautomobiletoolapplianceinstrument
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Scanfrost
 and it is 13 Possible spelling mistake. 'metres' is British English.meters
metres
 wide and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 it.

Lastly
, I would like us to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 at Lakeside Hotel by 3: 00PM This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that we could spend time, drink together and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 movies at the cinema section.

Thanks in anticipation. I look forward to seeing you. Best regards, Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphSlides.Slides!Slides?Slides:Slides,Slides;
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