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Write a letter to the local council about the problem of the road near your house Explain where you live Describe the problem Explain when you want him to do

Write a letter to the local council about the problem of the road near your house Explain where you live Describe the problem Explain when you want him to do PVRPK
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to complain about the miserable condition of the road within the proximity of my house. My name is Sonam and I am living in Hargobind Nagar, Karnal, which is extremely close to NH5. Although this is a posh colony, the conditions of the streets say something else and making this locality unsuitable to live in. Let me explain my situation. Actually the street was built a few months ago. We were really delighted at the development of this area. But it is really disappointing that the material was not of excellent quality. As a result, pits are quite common here these days. This situation becomes terrible in the rainy season and it is a major cause of accidents in the nearby region. I would be really grateful if you do something to get these big holes repaired or reconstruction of the road. Taking into consideration, the complexity of the problem, this should be resolved as soon as possible. Hoping for a prompt action from you in this regard. Yours faithfully Sonam
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to complain about the miserable condition of the road within the proximity of my
house
.

My name is
Sonam and
I am living in
Hargobind
Nagar,
Karnal
, which is
extremely
close to NH5. Although this is a posh colony, the conditions of the streets say something else and making this locality unsuitable to
live
in.

Let
me
explain
my situation. Actually the street
was built
a few months ago. We were
really
delighted at the development of this area.
But
it is
really
disappointing that the material was not of excellent quality.
As a result
, pits are quite common here these days. This situation becomes terrible in the rainy season and it is a major cause of accidents in the nearby region.

I would be
really
grateful if you do something to
get
these
big
holes repaired or reconstruction of the road. Taking into consideration, the complexity of the problem, this should
be resolved
as
soon
as possible.

Hoping for a prompt action from you in this regard.

Yours
faithfully


Sonam
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the local council about the problem of the road near your house Explain where you live Describe the problem Explain when you want him to do

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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