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Write a letter to your friend to get back your coat.

Write a letter to your friend to get back your coat. OVRGp
I am already vastly missing you even though it has been only a few days since we met. Well, I am writing this letter to tell you about my winter coat which I left at your place. After coming back home, I realized that my jacket is missing. Therefore, I checked my car twice and my home as well but no luck! Then, I suddenly remember about the place where I might have left it. So, I am certain that it is in a cupboard, located in your room. I left home right after talking with you and forget to go upstairs and grab it. It would be a great help if you could bring that at my place as I have all my credit cards and licence in the left pocket of the jacket. As your university is nearby my house, you can give it back to me at your convenience or else I can pick up from the university. Please let me know. I will be waiting for you and my coat!
I am already
vastly
missing you
even though
it has been
only
a few days since we met. Well, I am writing this letter to
tell
you about my winter coat which I
left
at your place.

After coming back home, I realized that my jacket is missing.
Therefore
, I
checked
my car twice and my home
as well
but
no luck! Then, I
suddenly
remember about the place where I might have
left
it.
So
, I am certain that it is in a cupboard, located in your room. I
left
home right after talking with you and forget to go upstairs and grab it.

It would be a great
help
if you could bring that at my place as I have all my credit cards and
licence
in the
left
pocket of the jacket.

As your university is nearby my
house
, you can give it back to me at your convenience or else I can pick up from the university.
Please
let
me know. I will be waiting for you and my coat!
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend to get back your coat.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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