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Letter to the municipal authority complaining about damaged road

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Hello Mr Putin, My name is Dmitry Ipatov, local resident of Kudrovo, Saint-Petersburg for the past 3 years, working as Senior Network Engineer at OKKO. I’m writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about a road issue in front of my house. Three months ago, due to emergency work on the heat transmission network, the road before my house was damaged. Since that time the road has a big hole, which was filled with sand and crushed stone, and several harmed paving stones. Due to that pothole it is pretty hard to walk and drive the cars, also its affecting tires of people's cars who are passing through the street. I complained about the aforementioned issue to municipal authority few weeks ago, but nothing has been done. We already have some minor accident and I would suggest you to take required and immediate actions and send repairing team to prevent a major one. Your sincerely, Dmitry I.
Hello Mr Putin,

My name is
Dmitry
Ipatov
, local resident of
Kudrovo
, Saint-Petersburg for the past 3 years, working as Senior Network Engineer at
OKKO
. I’m writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about a road issue in front of my
house
.

Three months ago, due to emergency work on the heat transmission network, the road
before
my
house
was damaged
. Since that time the road has a
big
hole, which
was filled
with sand and crushed stone, and several harmed paving stones. Due to that pothole it is pretty
hard
to walk and drive the cars,
also
its affecting tires of
people
's cars who are passing through the street.

I complained about the aforementioned issue to municipal authority few weeks ago,
but
nothing has
been done
. We already have
some
minor accident and I would suggest you to take required and immediate actions and
send
repairing team to
prevent
a major one.

Your
sincerely
,

Dmitry
I.
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IELTS letter Letter to the municipal authority complaining about damaged road

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
157 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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