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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat.

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat. 332n
Dear John, Hope you are doing well. I am writing to apologise for the disturbance caused to you last week. To be honest I felt very sorry when I got your complaint. Last week we had a get-together with our extanded family, therefore there were a bunch of people. Finally our relatives managed to visit us after such a long period. Obviously, we tried to organize a memorable welcoming party for them. However, we had no idea that the noise would reach your house and cause you trouble. I am really sorry for the inconvenience. I do hope that you will accept my sincere apologies. I assure you that this will not happen again. This was the first party that we organized in Canada and it split from our mind that we were not in Armenia any more. Moreover, I will take into consideration the cultural differences as well, cause in Armenia, we are speaking loudly. Best regards, Margarita
Dear John,

Hope you are doing well.

I am writing to
apologise
for the disturbance caused to you last week. To be honest I felt
very
sorry when I
got
your complaint.

Last week we had a
get
-together with our
extanded
family,
therefore
there were a bunch of
people
.
Finally
our relatives managed to visit us after such a long period.
Obviously
, we tried to organize a memorable welcoming party for them.

However
, we had no
idea
that the noise would reach your
house
and cause you trouble. I am
really
sorry for the inconvenience. I do hope that you will accept my sincere apologies.

I
assure you that this will not happen again. This was the
first
party that we organized in Canada and it split from our mind that we were not in Armenia
any more
.
Moreover
, I will take into consideration the cultural differences
as well
, cause in Armenia, we are speaking
loudly
.

Best regards,

Margarita
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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