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email about moving house

email about moving house eRkYO

Hi, AnnaI hope you are well. We have just moved to our villa nearer the mountains, because our city house is becoming hotter and hotter day by day. This charming villa is conveniently located for the mountains, seabeach, forests. This quiet place's more impressive than our house. The spectacular view of the sea can be seen from the balcony. I'd rather it was further from the city centre, because the further from the city center, the fresher air is. The substantial and contemporary swimming pool makes this villa more charming. All our neighbours are polite and friendly with us. One of them is an English teacher as me. She is tall, with gorgeous eyes and straight hair. We've just made decision for going hiking to the mountains. Can you go with us? I hope so. If you join us I'll be very happy

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