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Write a letter to the company. In your letter, you need to explain the following: when and where you hired the car describe how the accident happened what kind of action you took after the accident

Write a letter to the company. In your letter, you need to explain the following: when and where you hired the car describe how the accident happened what kind of action you took after the accident y6lJ
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you about the accident I involved in last Night on 27th May 2020. With regard to the car, I Hired from U-Haul centre situated at 100 Main St, Brampton on 26th May. It was Camry SE 2019, Black with number plate Jassalz. The car was rented for! week Regards with the accident, It was the 27th night at 9 P. m. When I was going to pick my husband from work. It was an unavoidable accident, I was crossing lights. But another person did not notice red lights and I Was hit by a car It was her fault. Right after the accident I call 911 and report the incident to them. Also, I called the insurance company and report everything to them. They also took the information of Second-party and need some of my documents. But everything is done. All losses will be paid by the Second-party Also, they agreed to pay $800. But now I intend to request another car as a replacement. Thank you. Yours Sincerely, Irbanjeet Kaur jassal,
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to inform you about the
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accident
I involved in last Night on 27th May 2020. With regard to the
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car
, I Hired from U-Haul
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centre
situated at 100 Main St, Brampton on 26th May. It was Camry SE 2019, Black with number plate
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Jassalz
. The
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car
was rented
for!
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week


Regards with the
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accident
, It was the 27th night at 9 P. m.
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When
I was going to pick my husband from work. It was an unavoidable
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accident
, I was crossing lights.
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But
another person did not notice red lights and I
Was hit
by a
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car
It was her fault.

Right after the
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accident
I call 911 and report the incident to them.
Also
, I called the insurance
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company
and report everything to them. They
also
took the information of Second-party and need
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some
of my documents.
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But
everything
is done
. All losses will
be paid
by the Second-party
Also
, they
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agreed
to pay $800.
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But
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now
I intend to request another
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car
as a replacement.

Thank you.

Yours
Sincerely
,

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Irbanjeet
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Kaur
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jassal
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the company. In your letter, you need to explain the following: when and where you hired the car describe how the accident happened what kind of action you took after the accident

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
181 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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