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Write an apologise letter to your boss because you can not do the task at the weekend due to the problems that you have with your family

Write an apologise letter to your boss because you can not do the task at the weekend due to the problems that you have with your family PgExj
Dear Madam, I am writing to apologise for not completing my promise that I made you yesterday that I would work for extra hours the following day and finish the check of the documents of the company. Due to the fact that my little son got sick I have to take him to the hospital and see the doctor tomorrow. For this reason, I afraid that I can not fulfill my promise which I gave you before. But I assure you that I will do it on Sunday in spite of it is a weekend. I hope, you will accept my apologise and give me a chance to do the task. Wish you all the best. Hopefully, Nigora Egamova.
Dear Madam,

I am writing to
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apologise
for not completing my promise that I made you yesterday that I would work for extra hours the following day and finish the
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check
of the documents of the
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company
.

Due to the fact that my
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little
son
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got
sick I
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have to
take him to the hospital and
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see
the doctor tomorrow.
For this reason
, I afraid that I can not fulfill my promise which I gave you
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before
.
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But
I assure you that I will do it on Sunday
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in spite of
it is a weekend.

I hope, you will accept my
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apologise
and give me a chance to do the task.

Wish you all the best.

Hopefully
,

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Nigora
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Egamova
.
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IELTS letter Write an apologise letter to your boss because you can not do the task at the weekend due to the problems that you have with your family

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