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In my letter about my friend

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I'm writing in regards to an advertisment in my local paper for the post of junior secretary. I have recently completed a Business studies. During my course I went on a number of work placements. I have also completed a level two typing course. In my summer holidays I worked in a small business as a trainel secretary. I contacted them during my course and they were keen to offer me a job during the summer. I would be very interested in working for your firm and can provide refrence when required. Please find attacted my books and news papers.

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 in my local paper for the post of junior secretary. I have recently completed a Business studies. During my course I went on a number of work placements. I have also
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trainel
 secretary. I contacted them during my Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).course, and
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 they were keen to offer me a job during the summer. I would be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
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refrence
 when required. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
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 my books and This word is normally spelled as one.newspapers
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