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Write a letter to the charity event Explain the situation

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Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to get an opportunity to support in a charity event. I have seen the advertisement in a local newspaper on 15, March. The predominant reason for my interest towards this ongoing event is due to the support given by the society. In other words, I have been studying the medical research course with the aid given by a charitable trust. I have so much dependent on that organisation since my childhood for my education. Last year, I had participated in the programme of distribution of stationary for school children, organised by the Nestam Charitable trust. I have primarily involved in packing up of those stationary in the bags and transportation of items to the respective schools. For your ongoing occasion, I can provide my sincere support for that entire day irrespective of indoor or outdoor activities. Additionally, if you required any funds for this celebration, please let me know so that I will plan for fund raising activity with the help of my contacts. Looking forward for your invitation to the upcoming ceremony. Thank you so much. Yours faithfully, Meera Sharee
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to
get
an opportunity to support in a charity
event
. I have
seen
the advertisement in a local newspaper on 15, March.

The predominant reason for my interest towards this ongoing
event
is due to the support
given
by the society.
In other words
, I have been studying the medical research course with the aid
given
by a charitable trust. I have
so
much dependent on that
organisation
since my childhood for my education.

Last year, I had participated in the
programme
of distribution of stationary for school children,
organised
by the
Nestam
Charitable trust. I have
primarily
involved in packing up of those stationary in the bags and transportation of items to the respective schools.

For your ongoing occasion, I can provide my sincere support for that entire day irrespective of indoor or outdoor activities.
Additionally
, if you required any funds for this celebration,
please
let
me know
so
that I will plan for
fund raising
activity with the
help
of my contacts.

Looking forward for your invitation to the upcoming ceremony. Thank you
so
much.

Yours
faithfully
,

Meera
Sharee
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the charity event Explain the situation

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
187 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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