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Letter to Friend about moving into his City for a Job

Letter to Friend about moving into his City for a Job KwlKL

Dear Bob, Hope you and your family are doing well. I’m glad to share that I have been offered a Job in London however I’m not sure whether to accept the offer without knowing much about the city. As you know the weather is very important for us, I heard it rains a lot in London even in Summer, is that True? How is primary education in local School? Both my children are in Primary 1 & 3 and would prefer to minimize the disruption in their studies and seamlessly able to join the school in London. London is a big city and densely populated, could you please suggest a safe neighbourhood outside the city to live in and be able to easily commute to Central London. I have also heard that the health care in United Kingdom works differently than in Singapore and there is a National Health System in place, even the foreigners are registered under the NHS and receives free treatment via the General Physician. Hope to hear from you soon. We would be able to meet more often should I accept this offer. Cheers, Fred

Dear Bob,

Hope you and your family are doing well. I’m glad to share that I have been offered
 a Job in London however
 I’m not sure whether to accept the offer without knowing much about the city.

As you know the weather is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 for us, I heard it rains a lot in London even in Summer, is that True?

How is primary education in local School? Both my children are in Primary 1 & 3 and would prefer to minimize the disruption in their studies and seamlessly
 able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 the school in London.

London is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 city and densely
 populated, could you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 suggest a safe Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbourhood' is British English.neighborhood
neighbourhood
 outside the city to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in and be able to easily
 commute to Central London.

I have also
 heard that the health care in United Kingdom works Use "(differently)" to make a comparison with this adjective.(differently)
differently
 than in Singapore and there is a National Health System in place, even the foreigners are registered
 under the NHS and receives free treatment via the General Physician.

Hope to hear from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. We would be able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 more This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 should I accept this offer.

Cheers,

Fred