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Write a letter to the authority to report a missing item

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to report a missing item. I was travelling by the Metro train from the Anna Nagar station to Ashok Nagar on 09th February 2021 between 10. 30 AM and 11 AM. I had my handbag with me when I boarded the train at 10. 30 AM at the Anna Nagar Junction. It came to my notice that my handbag was missing after getting down at the Ashok Nagar metro station. The train had already departed before I could quickly check the coach for my handbag. The handbag is small, brown in colour and is square in shape. My employer identification card with the unique identification number 7218 is in the handbag along with a few personal belongings and my wallet. I left the same behind in Coach number 2. Request you to kindly check and confirm if the same was handed over to the metro station authorities. I can be reached on my personal mobile 89018912. If the handbag is found, I can personally come and collect the same from the department. Thanks & Regards Padma
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to report a missing item. I was travelling by the Metro train from the Anna Nagar station to Ashok Nagar on 09th February 2021 between 10. 30 AM and 11 AM.

I had my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
handbag
with me when I boarded the train at 10. 30 AM at the Anna Nagar Junction. It came to my notice that my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
handbag
was missing after getting down at the Ashok Nagar metro station. The train had already departed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
I could
quickly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
the coach for my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
handbag
. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
handbag
is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
,
A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
brown in colour
and is
A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
square in shape
. My employer identification card with the unique identification number 7218 is in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
handbag
along with a few personal belongings and my wallet. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
the same behind in Coach number 2. Request you to kindly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
and confirm if the same
was handed
over to the metro station authorities.

I can
be reached
on my personal mobile 89018912. If the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
handbag
is found
, I can
personally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
and collect the same from the department.

Thanks & Regards

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Padma

IELTS letter Write a letter to the authority to report a missing item

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
182 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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