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A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country you have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him write a letter to this friend in your letter tell your friend about job and what sort of work it involves say what you think the job would be suitable for him explain how to apply for job

Dear Sara, How are you. Hope you are doing well. I am writing to you regarding your request for finding a job you will be very happy to know that I have found it in a medical centre as your profession is related to this job. The company provides experience to fresher candidates for six month after competition of required duration you will start your job as professional doctor. There you have to attend out patient and you will have a nurse to regularly check patients. As you told me you have just completed your MBBS. . 5 years program and searching for job so this is the place where you can practice your abilities well and can achieve much more in future and touch you goals besides you will gain experience in same field. As you are fresher so it’s best place for you to join in order to save your precious time. They also provided their contact details and email address on which you can send your updates c. v along with documents. so that they can easily assist you. you should apply for it as soon as possible as you know there are limited seats available so don’t wait more. Hope you will consider my information and so take a positive step. Best wishes,

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job
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very
 happy to know that I have found it in a medical Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 as your profession is related
 to this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 provides experience to fresher candidates for six Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: "months".months
month
 after competition of required duration you will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
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job
 as professional doctor. There you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 attend out patient and you will have a nurse to regularly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 patients. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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 you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
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just
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job
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so
 this is the place where you can practice your abilities well and can achieve much more in future and touch you goals besides
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so
 it’s best place for you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 in order to save your precious time. They also
 provided their contact This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 and email address on which you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 your updates c. v along with documents. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSo
so
 that they can easily
 assist you. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterYou
you
 should apply for it as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible as you know there are limited
 seats available This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 don’t wait more. Hope you will consider my information and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 take a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 step. Best wishes, 