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write a letter to your neighbour to complaint about the noise coming out their house

Dear Mr. Kim, I am writing this letter to give you the reasons for the din last night. First of all, our family feel sorry about the noise that we made last night. The reason why we made such noises was that my wife got sick and I was too upset about it and I yelled at my children. My wife was so healthy and energetic until the day before yesterday. However, the problem started with the cat which my children brought from the street. I guess, the cat was abandoned. As you know, my wife is allergic to cats and therefore, my wife got sick. As I mentioned before, I'm really sorry about last night, and we will not make any noises again. I send you this letter with some fruits as a gift for apology. Please take and enjoy. To prevent making noises, I will build the "noise cancelling wall" between your house and my house. Also, I will never get mad and I will never shout or yell at my family. I look forward to your positive response.
Dear Mr. Kim,

I am writing this letter to give you the reasons for the din last night.

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First of all
, our family feel sorry about the
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noise
that we made last night.

The reason why we made such
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noises
was that my
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wife
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got
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sick and
I was too

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upset
about it and I yelled at my children. My
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wife
was
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so
healthy and
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energetic


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until
the day
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before
yesterday.
However
, the problem
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started
with the cat which

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my
children brought from the street. I guess, the cat
was abandoned
. As you know, my
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wife
is allergic to cats and
therefore
, my
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wife
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got
sick.

As I mentioned
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before
, I'm
really
sorry about last night, and we will not
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make
any
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noises
again. I
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send
you this letter with
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some
fruits as a gift for apology.
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Please
take and enjoy.

To
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prevent
making
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noises
, I will build the
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"
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noise cancelling
wall
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"
between your
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house
and my
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house
.
Also
, I will never
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get
mad and I will never shout or yell at my family.

I look forward to your
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positive
response.
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IELTS letter write a letter to your neighbour to complaint about the noise coming out their house

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  American English
10 paragraphs
181 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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