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write a letter to your neighbour to complaint about the noise coming out their house

Hi Ron, Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to bring out my concern regarding the noise from your apartment. I hear extremely loud construction noises from your apartment from 09AM to 12PM everyday. This has been the continuing case for the last two weeks. I have a new-born child, and the said noise agitates the child a lot. The sounds also happen to be during peak working hours. I work from home, and most of my work involves taking on calls with multiple people. Concentrating on the calls is getting extremely difficult with the noise. I am forced to reschedule my work around the noise. The noise is affecting my everyday life. Kindly let me know when the construction is due to be completed and if there is anything you can do to curtail the noise. Awaiting your response on the same. Thanks Padma
Hi Ron,

Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to bring out my concern regarding the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
from your apartment. I hear
extremely
loud construction
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noises
from your apartment from 09AM to 12PM
'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?
everyday
. This has been the continuing case for the last two weeks.

I have a new-born child, and the said
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
agitates the child a lot. The sounds
also
happen to be during peak working hours. I work from home, and most of my work involves taking on calls with multiple
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
. Concentrating on the calls is getting
extremely
difficult with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
. I
am forced
to reschedule my work around the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
is affecting my everyday life.

Kindly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know when the construction is due to
be completed
and if there is anything you can do to curtail the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
. Awaiting your response on the same.

Thanks

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Padma
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IELTS letter write a letter to your neighbour to complaint about the noise coming out their house

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  American English
6 paragraphs
147 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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