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write a letter to your neighbour to complaint about the noise coming out their house

Nowasdays, people buy many things after watching or seeing advertisements. Some people argue that advertising forces us to buy stuffs that we don't require. Others' opnions are that advertisements gives us good information to buy up to date products that may evaluate our lives' quality. However, people are easily tempted by many useless advertisements and buy things that they don't need. Therefore, I agree with people who say the advertising forces us to purchase things that we don't need. First, when you watch the advertisements on the tv, we can realize that there is too much overreacted expression. In Canada, there are many pharmaceutical company, and when they provide advertisement of their new products, they say that these are good for everyone without explanation. Also, commercial companies lies all the time to sell their products and if customers want refund, they will say "no refund". Secondly, most products that they show on the advertisements are totally useless in our lives. Because, if those products are useful and necessary for evaluating our lives, we may already buy it. However, if we don't have the products, it means that we don't need those products. Then, there are so many moments that we buy the products impulsively, especially after wathing advertisements. Each people have different income and they always have plan for outcome. However, those commercials tempts us everyone to buy thins impulsively. We have to stop watching commercials. As following reasons, I agree with the people who argue that advertisements encourage us to purchase thinhs that we don't require for our lives.
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things after watching or seeing advertisements.

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people
argue that advertising forces us to
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opnions
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advertisements
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up to date
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products
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' quality.
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people
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advertisements
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, I
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don't
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, we can realize that there is too much overreacted expression. In Canada, there are
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many
pharmaceutical
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, and when they provide
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their new
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, they say that these are
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good
for everyone without explanation.
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lies all the time to sell their
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are
totally
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lives
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, we may already
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products
, it means that we
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don't
need those products.

Then, there are
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moments that we
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wathing
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advertisements
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, those commercials tempts us everyone to
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. We
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advertisements
encourage us to
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purchase
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thinhs
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IELTS letter write a letter to your neighbour to complaint about the noise coming out their house

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
260 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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