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You want to sell your laptop. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend.

Dear rahimHope you are doing well, I’m doing fine, though my life hectic at the moment, as you know, I'm moving abroad and there is to much to do! There are a few thing’s that I can’t take with me because they are very weigher, so I’m seeing if any of my friend would be interested to buying them. One of the thinks i do not want to take with me is my laptop l. So if someone interest to buy it I’ll give him a cheap price. It’s a 21” flat screen laptop, and it’s a dell model, it has a 500 gb hard-disk, 4 gb RAM duel core processor, with charger & some accessories you can watch movie & listening music too. Furthermore, you can use for official documentary. As you know, I’m leaving the country at the end of month, so if you wanted to see it please inform before upcoming week. If you aren’t interested to buy i will sell it elsewhere. Ok, i look forward to seeing you All the best

Dear Possible spelling mistake found.Fairhope
rahimHope
 you are doing well,

I’m doing fine, though my life hectic at the moment, as you know, I'm moving abroad and there is Did you mean "too much to"?too much to
to much to
 do!

There are a few The possessive apostrophe seems to be incorrect. Please remove the apostrophe if you want to use the plural form of 'thing'.things
thing’s
 that I can’t take with me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 weigher, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I’m seeing if any of my friend would be interested
 to buying them. One of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonsassumesbelievesconsiders
thinks
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 do not want to take with me is my laptop l. “So if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
So if
 someone The pronoun 'someone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "interests", "interested".interestsinterested
interest
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 it I’ll give him a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :economical
cheap
 price.

It’s a 21” flat screen laptop, and it’s a dell model, it has a 500 Possible spelling mistake found.GBgolbKGBGIKB
gb
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
-disk, 4 Possible spelling mistake found.GBgolbKGBGIKB
gb
 RAM duel core processor, with charger & This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 accessories you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 movie & listening music too. Furthermore
, you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 for official documentary. As you know, I’m leaving the country at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of month, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 if you wanted to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 inform This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 upcoming week. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 you aren’t interested to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
Did you mean "I"?I
i
 will sell it elsewhere.

Ok, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 look forward to seeing you All the best