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my informal letter based on apologizing

my informal letter based on apologizing k59Ld

Dear Jack Brown, I am writing in connection with apologizing you, because of disorder actions of our company’s worker. First of all, I must inform that he had drunk alhogolic. Consequently, I am asking for sorry from his name. However, all costs have been paid. Therefore, I must apologize profusely for his bad words that were told you. He was nervous about his familiar events while he was damaging to your company’s restaurant. I do hope this will not have a negative impact on you mood and the situation of you fabric. Hence, if so, he cannot pay you extra money, owing to the fact that his budget is not very well. Once again I hope my apologies will be accepted and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon Your sincerely Lucy, Smith.

Dear Jack Brown,

I am writing in connection with apologizing you, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of disorder actions of our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
’s worker. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 inform that he had drunk Possible spelling mistake found.alcoholic
alhogolic
. Consequently
, I am asking for sorry from his name. However
, all costs have been paid
. Therefore
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 apologize profusely
 for his This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 words that were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 you. He was nervous about his familiar This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
 while he was damaging to your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
’s restaurant. I do hope this will not have a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 impact on Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'you'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
you mood
 and the situation of you fabric. Hence
, if This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, he cannot pay you extra money, owing to the fact that his budget is not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 well. Once again I hope my apologies will be Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).accepted, and
accepted and
 I am looking forward to hearing from you Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphsoon.soon!soon?soon:soon,soon;
soon


Your sincerely


Lucy, Smith. 