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Write a letter to the admission tutor. Bw1W5
Dear Mr. smith, I am writing this letter to express my regret and sorrow with the failure to attend the admission interview being arranged on 15th, October. I had faced the unavoidable event, and then I had missed your interview. I am a foreign student and I came here with my brother, and so the only relative that I have is him. Yesterday he got into the accident and brought to the emergency room of the Qurickland Hospital. He got into a life struggle for a while and now keep in ICU. I got so fretting by that condition and could not shaken it out. I am sincerely sorry for being unable to come to your interview yesterday. I am aware of how much important was the interview as it decided my entrance to the Queen University. I would appreciate if you could reschedule our appointment to tomorrow or later tonight. My brother is in critical condition now and therefore, could u please provide me with the information how long the interview is going to take and whether any exam during the interview. I would like to manage and prepare for it while taking care of my brother. Please look into the matter at your earliest convenience. I look forward to hearing from you. With respect, Jennie.
Dear Mr. smith,

I am writing this letter to express my regret and sorrow with the failure to attend the admission
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interview
being arranged
on 15th, October.

I had faced the unavoidable
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event
, and then I had missed your
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interview
.
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I
am a foreign student and I came here with my brother, and
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so
the
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only
relative that I have is him. Yesterday he
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got
into the accident and brought to the emergency room of the
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Qurickland
Hospital. He
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got
into a life struggle for a while and
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now
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keep
in ICU. I
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got
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so
fretting by that condition and could not shaken it out.

I am
sincerely
sorry for being unable to
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come
to your
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interview
yesterday.
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I
am aware of how much
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important
was the
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interview
as it decided my entrance to the Queen University.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would appreciate if you could reschedule our appointment to tomorrow or later tonight.

My brother is in critical condition
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now
and
therefore
, could u
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please
provide me with the information how long the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
is going to take and whether any exam during the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
. I would like to manage and prepare for it while taking care of my brother.

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Please
look into the matter at your earliest convenience. I look forward to hearing from you.

With respect,

Jennie.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the admission tutor.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
217 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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