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Hi Teacher Faith, How are you? Hope you well at home. I have a great news to share! My older sister has passed the university text! For real. She want to have some money before she move to the university. So she doing a commission to earn money and experience. We going to celebrate this at home for safe! But I'm not really happy cause without her, I will be lonely and no one wash the dishes for me. How about you? Do you have any good news? Do you like to be at home like this? : ) Back not soon. Jenny
Hi Teacher Faith,

How are you? Hope you well at home.

I have
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "great news".
a great news
to share! My older sister has passed the university text! For real. She
The pronoun 'She' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "wants", "wanted".
want
to have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
money
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
she
The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "moves", "moved".
move
to the university.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
Did you mean "she's doing", "she is doing", or "she was doing"?
she doing
a commission to earn money and experience.

Did you mean "We're going", "We are going", or "We were going"?
We going
to celebrate this at home for safe!

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
I'm not
really
happy cause without her, I will be lonely and no one wash the dishes for me.

How about you? Do you have any
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
news? Do you like to be at home like this? :
Don't put a space before the closing parenthesis
)


Back not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Jenny

IELTS letter write an email to a friend giving your news

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
102 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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